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February 20th, 2017, 8:00 am

the metaphor got lost a little bit.

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January 22nd, 2018, 2:17 am


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February 20th, 2017, 10:05 am


Sloppy backgrounds Nice work on the character designs with this page, but the background objects could use some work, more specifically the line work. The lack of straight lines on objects like the door or that chair is a little jarring, and make it look rushed. This is even more apparent because in the bottom panels the door looks fine, but the chair seems sloppy. There's also that middle panel where Sarah is walking in and, despite the door swinging inward, the floor appears to be overlapping. I know the characters are the main focus, and like I said, they look nice, but the environments around them do still some level of importance.
As always these criticisms are meant to be constructive, and while I'm aware that this was actually drawn a while ago, I do hope these points may be taken into consideration with future pages.

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