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February 2nd, 2017, 8:00 am

"You don't know how many people have been badgering me for my research project on antebellum farming, it's driving me nuts!"

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February 1st, 2017, 10:35 pm


What can be sadder than a teacher without a TA?


January 23rd, 2018, 3:55 am


User's Comments


February 2nd, 2017, 9:02 am


Hm. I like the dialogue on this page, but I'm seeing a lot of inconsistencies in the characters' anatomy.
In the top panels it looks like Tea is sporting a potbelly, yet in the other panels it's just the usual pudge. Her head also looks way oversized in the bottom left panel, and the angle of her feet suggests that they're lifting up off the ground. Or do the characters just walk on their toes?
Pepper's anatomy is all right, but her height appears a bit inconsistent. Also, her legs and tail appear to have vanished under that desk as they're not visible in that space underneath.
Both characters' tails appear rather low in terms of where they're originating. I would suggest a higher placement to give the impression that they're stemming from the base of their spines.
Keep in mind that this is all meant to be constructive. I'm still really enjoying the narrative. ^_^
As a side note, I didn't realize that your characters don't wear shoes before now, or that Tea has such a pronounced bubble bottom. XD


February 2nd, 2017, 2:24 pm


@AnthroLoverJay: I appreciate the critique. Really though, because I made this over a month ago, it's hard to even remember the state of mind I had while drawing this. A lot of the issues you brought up I've learned how to fix by now (hopefully), and other stuff was experimenting, but I really don't remember for sure.
And yes, they walk on their toes, Khajiit style.

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